AFAICS what's wrong with it is that I wasn't certain about the correct terminology because I hadn't investigated it properly. I don't think getting the terminology precisely right will make much difference to the understanding of most users unless we define the terminology as well.What's wrong with this sentence:
I'm not much of a hacker, and the last I heard xload was going to be switched off in Puppy 4.2, but when I get a chance I might have a look to see if I can add a tooltip or a context menu.